Audience feedback

Our group have shown this to some of our friends and family to get there opinions on our thriller. Just to see if there is anything we can improve to make it up to a higher quality. Here is some of the feedback:

• Firstly one of our Friends pointed out that our titles may be in the wrong order because the actors names come up before the directors name and felt that this should be the other way round. 
• Therefore we have changed this because we wanted all the feedback as we could to help improve our thriller. We all agreed on that this may be in the wrong order so we have changed it so it should be in the right order.
• Also we found that the shot around 1:01 isn't needed at its there for a split second therefore there isn't enough time to see what is actually happening. We haven't took this as out of yet but I think we are going to get rid of it as we also thought it was an unnecessary scene to have.
  
   
• Also someone pointed out the title screen looks a bit too cartoonish and the slowed down laughter doesn't quite work. They said Perhaps an uncomfortably loud heartbeat/thud would be better and a white on black with ‘Fact’ then ‘Or’ then ‘Fiction’ coming up on the screen.
• Then lastly Between 1.53 and 2.11 the speed of these cuts need speeding up to go in time to the clock ticking. Alternate between black screen and glimpses of the dead bodies…just enough to show the audience what has happened and the screen of the phone to make the viewer work harder! And they said perhaps you can use this section to bring up your main title screen?

We are going to as a group go away and look through these comments and try to tweak a few things to make our thriller to the top mark.